Friday 13 June 2014

The Angel Who Fought For Man

Here is a short story I wrote for the Writers Remix Project. One day I went for a walk and came back with this in my head. Some ideas are just like that.


The Angel Who Fought For Man
By Nick B Clarke

February 20th of the 4th Empire. I remember that day like it was yesterday, bright and vividly. Angels fell from the sky. From that day, one question plagued all of us. Where is our God now?

One such angel fell like a meteor, right in front of me; she fell through a bridge into a ravine. I was part of the 38 regiment, platoon nine. Well, what was left of our platoon: in enemy lands lost and wounded, the eight of us went down to investigate this shard from the heavens. I remember her glow as the river flowed around her; beneath her, the riverbed was dry. She was unconscious, she wore white robes, her halo was floating above her head in an ethereal manner. We set up camp nearby and tended to her. Less than an hour passed before she awoke to our heated debate about her origins. In our stunned silence, she asked us where she was. I became the spokesperson “The bottom of the barrel”.

We hit the road once more; trying to get ourselves home was proving to be extremely difficult, getting her home would be impossible. She did fall from heaven, all she would say is that someone had layed siege to it and that she fell out while protecting it.

That day, we ran into an enemy patrol, that day we showed her the brutality of man. After the short skirmish, she miraculously healed our wounds. In return we promised to get her home, we promised the impossible. Soon she would show us that nothing was.

Midnight we slept. She awoke us to an enemy attack, they were only scouts, but she got severely wounded as we chased them off. It seemed she bled like we did. She healed in mere hours and survived as healthy as ever, but her glow vanished that night. I’m sure god wept.

The next day, we stumbled upon the main legion of the enemy army. Our angel proved her worth as she stretched her feathered wings and flew above the enemy, scouting their positions as we tried to come up with a plan of either escape or attack. Both looked grim.

Like a harbinger, she accidentally led them right to us. We tried to run, but got surrounded, a circle of pointed halberds and spears stopped us in our tracks. They grabbed for her wings, we retaliated with violence. In our defense, our angel picked up a sword and tried to break the circle: she drew her first blood. I saw her glowing halo solidify into metal. An enemy solider struck, cleaving her left wing right off, she retaliated and killed him. Her halo fell, and when it hit the ground, it shattered in two, exploding in a shockwave of light. In the confusion, we managed to escape into the forest.

We gave her pieces of our armour to wear and let her keep the sword. Our One-winged angel became a mascot of sorts for our forces, as stories seeped their way back home about ‘an angel who fights for man.’ We trained her to fight like us: she fought better. I had hoped she was better than this, beyond our petty squabbles, but for better or for worse, we remained with us. Our protector, saviour and prize. What she became was awe-striking.

We managed to reconvene with three other platoons at Solumn Village. It soon became apparent that we would have to defend it. Our enemies covered the hills in the distance. Our angel lead the charge in to what looked like certain death, still, sixteen of us, including me and my entire platoon, followed. The rest stayed behind the hastily scrambled fortifications of the village to watch the impending slaughter. On that grassy battlefield, we hit a roadblock. Our angel wasn’t the only fallen. We met her sister. Whether she was a sister in blood or simply divinity remained a mystery. The sister-angel-turned-succubus had wings of black and eyes of red. My legs shook, but I stood my ground. Our –One-winged-angel would be the one to save us from the succubus and army, she saved us all. I remember what she said word for word:

“Sister, I do not fight as a divinity. That is why we fell. Mortals waged war on the heavens, we despised them and fought back with divine power. Now I see that mortals fight for different reasons, they are divided and fight not because they hate what’s in front of them, but because they love what’s behind them. Today, I stand with them, not as a fallen-angel, but as a mortal. If any group of people can save heaven from themselves, it is them.”

The succubus simply snarled back. Our angel nodded. And just like that, they clashed into each other with mortal swords. Fighting like the animals we were. Divine could describe neither of them. Blood was spilled between them as the enemy army and the sixteen of us stayed out of the action. We could feel the scraping of swords resonate though the air, it was a death zone. In a fit of rage, the succubus tore our angel’s remaining wing out of her very back. Blood showered out, nerve endings and tendons snapped, the ground was soaked with red.

The sixteen of us tried to fight back; three of us died instantly, nine were disarmed in seconds. I could barely hold on to my own sword as my hands were coaxed with sweat. A sword penetrated the succubus’ torso. It was a gift from our newly-risen angel, one born of blood. The succubus escaped into the air, the enemy army took one glance at our blood-soaked angel of death, saw the first few fighters die by her hand and ran. We were all beyond redemption now, for we had helped defile and angel.

That angel fought as a creature of death from that day onward. Carving a path of blood and tears to victory. The war faded from action after eight more weeks, as did the Angel. But there was a far more sinister battle approaching.

A year passed, I travelled the world as a missionary, recruiting not warriors, but people who believed in my cause. I fought for the fallen, I helped train these men into hulking knights. To fulfill the promise I made. Now I climb the stairway to man’s ultimate fate. The fate of three worlds.

I looked around me. Ninety-three knights stood at the gateway to heaven. As paragons of good intention, retreading steps taken by their future.

The gate was slightly ajar. Heaven was exactly as described, statues of gold, fluffy clouds and all; minus one detail: the blood. We could only assume that this was the heaven of multiple worlds, a hub connecting us all, because it soon became apparent that the weapons, technology and ungodly machines that had previously invaded heaven, did not belong to ours. We were already too late.

We fought through heaven, seeing the dead in a place that should have no such death. We fought golems of metal with our swords, bashing our way closer to the centre. Weapons of impossible nature took our lives, we were indeed fighting men of the future, men who were just like us, we must have seemed like insects to them, but we swarmed them with brute force. We made it to the tower fortress of golden light; twelve of us did, anyway. Twelve of ninety-three.

We made it into a throne room just in time to see God die at the hands of man. Something not meant for the eyes of a petty mortal like myself. We also saw our no-winged-angel who had scouted ahead days in advance: tied down like a dog, bruised and beaten. At our entrance, she found the strength break free, killing the god-killer without mercy.

Although as fragile as a ceramic urn on the edge of a table, the future-soldiers were too surprise-stricken to make a move. The thirteen of us chased them out and barred the doors.

Our no-winged-angel looked into the empty throne and tears rolled down her cheeks. She explained that she was the only one who could get to the throne, but she was not divine enough to sit on it.

The end of days were coming, I could feel it. I could only imagine what sort of plan the other men had to allow the throne to do their bidding. I placed my hand, in what I hoped was a supportive manner, on her shoulder. She knew what she had to do. The fallen angel sat on the throne and smiled. It rejected her, her mortal life drained from her eyes. God was dead and their domain was now forfeit. Everything was an uncertainly. I dread to think that many worlds suffered an existential crisis.

I held my gauntlet to my heart, the eleven others stood by me. The entire fortress shook. For a brief moment, I could see the many worlds flicker below me. Everything was connected. I could see every earth, each one a universe in itself. I was awe-struck at its beauty. Heaven began to flicker between this view and its white walls, before everything disappeared in a blinding light. I saw her smile with tears. We had done the impossible. We had done all we could.

The next moment, we were falling through the sky. The protectors of our world. I mustn’t have been the only one who had my life flash through my mind, all the good moments and bad. Our armour shone as it caught the sunlight as we rained down from a height we had not known existed.

We must have looked like angels falling from the sky. Except this time, it wasn’t angels falling from heaven, it was men. Now as I fall, I feel a perfect serenity towards my world. Who knows what will happen without heaven. I wonder if there will still be a life beyond this one. I can hear a voice speaking to me like an echo, in fact, it probably is an echo of a memory, and something she once told me.

Anything can happen. Nothing is set in stone. So whatever does happen… I’ll see you in the next world.
That was the first Angel who fought for man. Did we make her a monster? No. We made her a mortal. Nothing lasts forever, not even heaven.

A strange thing happens as I carve a path downwards through the sky. I see a glimpse of a falling angel catch one of the surviving knights. Someone to tell the story. The story of angels falling from the sky, falling from divinity and allowing mortal men to save themselves. All because one Angel survived an impossible fall and picked up a sword. The Angel who fought for man.


I hit the ground at terminal velocity.